BBC Story Feedback

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Today, we were put into groups of 4 and were to read our BBC Articles out to each other in said group

Feedback Below


Kieran:
"lots of information, really interesting, I loved it, the pictures and sidebar where really related to the article and really draw reader attention.

only problem is there is a really huge paragraph block that needs to be smaller to maintain interest"


Shay:
"was good"



Peter
"very good information I didn't know this was happening"



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